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Chapter 1: The Letters from Hippocoon

3. The Map, the Shop, and the Pleading Eyes

“My little master, we’re in town,” the coachman rasped, voice rough as stone as he eased the carriage onto sun-warmed cobblestones.

Gwen looked up from his scroll, a smirk tugging at his lips, eyes bright with anticipation. “Good work. Stay close—we’ll need you this afternoon.”

He swung the door wide and strode out like the street belonged to him.

Heracles and Amelinda followed, both watching Gwen’s tall frame cut through the sunlight. The noon glare lit his short curls bronze, a fleeting halo that made him look like the gods themselves had spotlighted his arrival.

“Keep the horses ready,” Gwen called, voice easy but commanding.

“Yes, little master,” the coachman replied, giving a stiff nod before steering the carriage away.

The three stood in the heart of a bustling square. Perfectly cut cobblestones stretched beneath their feet, worn smooth by generations of steps. Ochre, pale blue, and rose-dust facades leaned together, their paint faded but glowing in the sun.

The air buzzed—warm bread from a baker’s stall, sharp leather from a cobbler’s shop, the sour tang of fish drifting from somewhere unseen.

At the fountain’s center, doves scattered cake crumbs from laughing children. Amelinda lingered on the sight, her lips curving with a memory—she’d once fed doves here, dreaming of a life bigger than buckets and scrub brushes.

Her gaze flicked to Heracles, measuring herself against his quiet power.

“No time for daydreaming,” Gwen cut in, light but insistent. He veered into a narrow alley without breaking stride. “We’ve got a shop to find.”

Heracles followed, scanning the storefronts and shadowed windows. Something about the town’s stillness pressed on him, secrets lurking where sunlight couldn’t reach.

Gwen pulled his Hippocoon letter from his pocket and flipped it over. A map shimmered in golden lines, pulsing faintly like a heartbeat. At its center, a red dot blinked.

“Right here,” he said, tapping the glow. “All-for-You Shop. That star doesn’t lie.”

Amelinda leaned closer, wide-eyed. “How does it even do that?”

“Invitation maps,” Gwen said, pride curling through his voice. “Only first-years can see them. Once you’ve gone, the magic fades.”

“Clever,” Heracles muttered, fingers brushing his own scroll—a weight he couldn’t put down.

The alley narrowed, walls slick with moss, the air damp and metallic. Shuttered windows sagged overhead, exhaling a chill that smelled of rust and mildew.

A gust stirred. A low hum rode the air, too soft to be speech, too close to ignore.

The map’s glow sharpened, pulling them forward.

After a few turns, the alley ended at a crooked shop. The wooden frame leaned as though tired of standing. Paint peeled back to gray splinters; a sign dangled from a rusted chain: All-for-You Shop, faded script swaying on its own breath.

The double doors sagged on warped hinges, one corner gnawed by rot. Fogged windows blurred the interior except for a flicker—dust, or shadow, or something that moved when they didn’t. A scent drifted out: old timber, damp cloth, and sweet herbs left too long in a shrine.

Gwen’s grin sharpened. “This is it.”

Amelinda frowned at the doors. “You sure? Looks like it’s been dead for years.”

“It’s the place.” Gwen held up the map. The golden lines pulsed once, as if nodding. “No mistake. Let’s move.”

They stepped closer. A sharp chime rang inside, cutting the stillness like a warning bell.

The doors groaned open. A figure glided out, clothes tailored and faintly shimmering like starlight caught in fabric. His gaze swept over them, cold and unreadable. A smile curled—thin, sharp, dangerous.

Heracles’s jaw clenched, hand brushing the scroll in his pocket as if to anchor himself.

Gwen’s grin faltered. His fingers twitched, bravado dimming for the first time.

The stranger passed without a word, swallowed by shadow. The echo of the chime lingered, metallic and hollow, fading slowly into the alley’s damp air. Heracles’s gaze snagged on the far edge, where a flicker of movement stirred.

A figure stood there—a girl cloaked in a hooded cape, her face hidden beneath the shadows. Her head tilted slightly, as if studying him, and for a heartbeat, her eyes caught the lamplight—glinting with a golden sorrow, sharp and pleading, like a soul trapped behind invisible bars, crying for help.

Before he could speak, she shifted, the edge of her cape whispering against the stones, and melted into the fog, leaving only the faint rustle of fabric behind.

“Did you see that?” Heracles muttered, his pulse quickening. Gwen glanced back, frowning. “See what? Mere shadows, friend.”

Amelinda’s eyes lingered on the empty alley, fingers tightening around her scroll. “I… thought I saw something too.” Her voice was soft, uncertain, threaded with unease.

The map in Gwen’s hand pulsed once, a gentle glow urging them onward. “Come on,” he said, shaking off the chill crawling up his spine. “We’ve got a temple to find.”

But Heracles couldn’t shake the weight of those eyes, burning with silent anguish, a plea for rescue he didn’t yet understand.

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