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Chapter 2: The Goat Man’s Boutique part 2

2. The Ascending Hum

The boys ducked into cubicles, shedding their armor. Chun hung the sets back on their racks, then led them deeper into the hall. The air pulsed again, a hum beneath their steps.

“Where’s Amelinda?” Heracles asked, voice low.

“With Chin, my assistant,” Chun said slyly. “Daughter of a tree nymph. Helping her pick something special.”

They reached neat rows of uniforms—navy or black trousers, crisp jackets, white shirts, canvas shoes. Nearly identical… except for the buttons. Heracles caught a faint shimmer, the same glow his armor carried.

“Not much to see,” Chun said, hoof clicking. “Check the buttons—silver, gold, even enchanted if you order early.” He leaned close. “Those pack a punch.”

“I’ll take enchanted,” Gwen said at once, already fingering a gold-button jacket.

“Try them on.” Chun hurried off as the bell above the door chimed for a new customer.

“Let’s do this,” Gwen said, grin wide as he snatched a uniform.

Heracles grabbed one too, more measured. They changed and stepped out together, laughter spilling—like kids in costumes.

“Sharp,” Gwen said, spinning in his navy set, gold buttons flashing.
“Not bad,” Heracles admitted. His black jacket, plain buttons and all, hugged close. Unflashy, but right. The quiet fit reminded him of the leather—chosen for him.

Chun reappeared. “Favorites picked?”

“Yep,” the boys said, each holding two sets.

“Good.” He jotted again. “I’ll fetch Amelinda.”

She bounded over, eyes sparkling.
“These uniforms are amazing! Look—I got a sailor collar, pleated skirt, a neckerchief—plus a jacket for style. And my training gear? Silver guards, leather boots—so comfy!” She twirled, skirt flaring, then faltered, doubt flickering—was it too much?

“Nice haul,” Gwen said, smirk approving.

“Leave them here,” Chun told them, gathering the uniforms. “Someone’s waiting upstairs.”

“Upstairs?” Amelinda blinked. “This place has a second floor?”

Chun’s smile stretched wider, eyes glinting. “Oh, full of surprises. Staircase at the hall’s end. Come back once you’ve got everything.”

“You’re not coming?” Heracles asked, cautious, hand brushing his scroll. The same pull from the black leather stirred again—fate whispering.

“No. This is my post.” Chun’s grin lingered. “Someone else will greet you.”

Heracles exchanged a glance with his friends. “Let’s go,” he said, steady but guarded.

“Catch you later, Chun!” Gwen called, grin bright. “This place is next-level.”

“See you!” Amelinda chimed, her excitement bubbling over shaky nerves.

They reached the marble staircase, golden light spilling across polished steps. At the landing, the glow faltered. Marble bled into creaking wood, boards flickering with a ghostly sheen.

The air thickened, laced with the dry tang of old parchment. A low hum stirred through the walls, steady as a heartbeat.

They stopped, trading uneasy looks.

“What was that?” Amelinda whispered. Her fingers dug into her scroll, eyes wide, fear and wonder tangled together.

“The shop shifted,” Heracles murmured, scanning the walls. His gut tightened—the same pull he’d felt with the armor.

Gwen’s grin sharpened. “This place has tricks. I like it.” He bounded up a step, reckless as ever.

A floorboard above creaked—slow, deliberate.

Amelinda flinched, voice trembling. “Now what?”

Heracles wrapped his hand around the rail, the wood humming faintly beneath his grip. “There’s a room ahead,” he said, caution edged with curiosity. “We’ll see what it wants to show us.”

The hum deepened, guiding them upward.

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